filling
well, the start was good and all, not too repetitive, but at 0:29 ~ 0:31, when the "stair" kind of like stuff ends, there could be some kind of bass or brass or something like that to fill the mid frequences, becasue the kicks give the tempo, the highs sound pretty armonic, but there is not so much background to give the song a strong ase to be build on, there is only the kicks and the bass arpeggio. You can see what i say by comparing 0:30 with 2:50... i hope you understood me, and that if that was the weay it was meant, then i can say that this work had no more flaws (in my opinion)
Im giving this a 5/9, and please keep making music!